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SILENTnightZFX
life is a mind bending road of intracitly weaved events strung togeather through the ballace of light and dark, Its ment to be a time for gathering essential knowlage needed to progress to you true spirtual calling.

JB Asilos @SILENTnightZFX

Age 31, Male

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between "A" & "B"

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I really need your help!!

Posted by SILENTnightZFX - February 6th, 2009


PLease, i need you opinion should i keep it as it is or work on ti some more?(spelling doesent count)

"Anger, hate, pain & dissiete,
one some days all 4 meet,
Im a fool, forIi fall for their trickery,
constantly and endlessly is their "Prickery",
I feel like drawing pints of blood,
not mine you fool! but that of those "DuDs",

Close my eyes and watch me die,
for there end will never make me cry,
It will only make me taste true freedom,
Because my instinced will tell me to beat them!!

I'll draw you blood like you drew mine,
until the day that you will find that you just fucked with the last guy you will ever want to,
because now my instinct tells me to end you,
and thats truely what I plan to do,

Good bye, good night, farewell, good riddens,
As blackness starts to consume your site,
the chances are that you just might,
realize that you just fucked with the SILENT NIGHT!!!!!!!!
"

I was so pissed off when I wrote this, but not at dark damsel no, at the people who insult me i really feel like hurting them. (pint is prenounced pie-nt)

I really need your help!!


Comments

I think youre dumb. I just insulted you. Watcha gon do write about it? lol

no, because a lifeless internet douche who cant get a girl freind or just a friend for that matter, you words mean nothing to me, your just pathetic, you need to get out of you moms closet you 24 year old vergin wad of donky cum. go fuck some more you with both of you pieces, you hamaphrodite pirck, Good Day sirrrrr......wait a sec.......S/he, lolZ almost forgot.

Its called a joke dude. Quit ranting.

meh, still, learn to live.

hiya

sup?