im really scared, i think she really loves me........... im not ready for that, you guys should read the poetrie shes done for me, im scared. booldy love, ____(my name) they sound so heartfelt. so I rote always in the darkness:--
"Im always in the darkness, trying to be alone, but you know i love you, never to be disowned,
the things you say, the shit you do, the things I love to here from you. the pain you cause me, to show you love me, is not to far from my eyes, for me to see, I dedicate this poem to you, because of all the things you do and to say, that i love you,
shadows are my freind, always to the end, my wounds never mend, always in the darkness, to be were I belong,
always in the darkness, to be were im alone."--. ......please tell me what you think of my poem.
I could really use some positive feed back...... and if you don't like it, tell me how I can make my writing
better... but all-in-all Im scared.
Cyberdevil
Great poetry, but you relly neeed to chek yer spellings.
SILENTnightZFX (Updated )
yeah i know im a terable speller, but thanx(thx for the humor ^-^)